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Day 9 Discussion

Day 9 Discussion

Q Speech Critique "How to Make Vodka Pasta" It's hard to remember a time before the Covid, but this speech was from last fall. This is a good example of a demonstration speech in the vein of what you will be doing at home. Today, our topic IS delivery, and that's what I want you to focus on. Her delivery is good, but not perfect, so let's talk about all the amazing things she does well, and some areas where she might improve. Use the demonstration speech rubric Download demonstration speech rubricto guide your critique, and use the language from my course guidance and the text in doing so. Post your initial 250-word critique (10-points) and two follow-up postings (5-points each).

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I overall thought she did a good job in her speech. I do think she kept very well eye contact with her classmates, did a good job in showing her classmates what is needed to get the recipe done. Her volume was good too because I had no trouble at all in hearing what she was saying so I am going to assume her class did not either. I like how precise she is in how much of everything you need to add and the fact that she is showing it is even better too. Her pronunciation was overall good too I did notice that her words would stumble around a bit but like I said it is normal for that to happen when one is feeling nervous.